Marriage

I think that the marriage is a  symbolic tradition for  some people because it is a beautiful  union between the man  and the woman when both declared their love and understanding, and others things.

But in the marriage there are things that do not results. Because of that,  people get divorced.  I think that the some problems of the marriage are  for  young people that  not mature enough or the person with who got marriage was not appropriate. For me, the marriage is totally unnecessary because I think the union can be without the ceremony because it is just important to be with the appropiate person.

Puntuaction.

1. On Friday , we will have another chance   > On Firday, we will have another chance.
2. It 's not necessary,but I will do it.       > It's not necessary,  but I will do it.
3. The movie,Full Speed, is coming soon.  >The movie Full Speed,  is coming soon
4. It' s a well designed program.    > It's  a well designed program
5. IBM(International Business Machines ) was not present   > IBM (International Business Machines), was not present.
6. Clinton said,"How do you like my budget"?  >Clinton said:  "How do you like my budget"?
7. The word "arbeit "is not English.    > The word "arbeit" is not English
8. The New York Times called it "a giant mistake. "   > The New York Times called it's a giant mistake.
9. The blue colored text is hypertext .  >The blue colored text  is hypertext.
10. HTML (hypertext markup language)is used to link documents,but the server must be able to find the document.  > HTML (Hypertex Markup Language) is used to link documents, but the server must be able to find document.
11. Turing said,"Give me read-write head and a..tape long enough and I will compute the world."  > Turing said "Give me read- write head, and a tape long  enough and I  will compute the world".
12. There are many technical terms, for example,"RAM", "ROM," and "EPROM."  > There are many technical terms, for example "RAM", "ROM" and "EPROM".
13. Three companies participated:Fujitsu,IBM, and NEC. >Three companies participated: FUJITSU, IMB, and NEC.
14. JIS ( Japan Industry Standard ) codes are used.  >JIS (Japan Industry Standard) codes are used.
15. That ' s not the procedure we need.  > That's not the procedure we need.
16. They invited NEC,IBM,and Toshiba to the trade show. > They invited NEC, IBM and TOSHIBA to the trade show.
17. It says that the third power of two(2^3) is eight.Is that right?  >It says that the three power of two (2^3) is eight.  Is that right?
18. Grace Murray Hopper, who developed the Common Business-Oriented Language (COBOL), said that, " If anyone asked if we were accomplishing anything, we replied that we were 'debugging"."    > Grace Murray Hopper who develop the  Common Bussines Oriented Language (COBOL) said that " If anyone asked if we were accomplishing anything, we replied that we were 'debugging'. "
19. ENIAC was...the world's first fully electronic general-purpose (programmable) digital computer, although this claim, as well as the validity of the patents for ENIAC, was challenged in 1973 by John V. Atanasoff (b.1903,) a professor at Iowa State College.  > ENIAC was the world first fully electronic general-porpose (programable) digital computer, although this claim, as well as the validity of  the parents  ofr ENIAC, was challenged in 1973 by John V. Atanasoff (b. 1903), a professir at lowa State College
20. Turing visited the United States in 1942 and apparently talked with John von Neuman (1903-1957) , a mathematician, but had little impact on the American development of the computer until after the war,at which time there was extensive American-English discussion on the subject of computation. > Turning vistited the United States in 1942 and apparentlu talked with John Von Neuman (1903-1957),  a mathematician, but had little impact on the American development od the computer  until after the war, at which time where was extensive American-Englidh discussion on the subject of computation.

Describing Places.

                    Office

 

The  first picture of the office it's very untidy because there are many a pile of papers and documents on the floor, also there isn't more space in the office it is too disorganized.

The job  in the office should be very very stressful.

                                     

The second picture is the best because it is more organisated and tiny than the other office. It is a pleasant place. The paper, books and documents are in a shelf. There is more space for working and shareing with the other members of the office because the place is not untidy.

                       

                                       

Bedroom

The first picture of the bedroom is tiny and beautiful because it has a bed with a  clasic desing and  bedspread

with stamps. The bedroom has good ilumination that is good for studying and making others things.       

 The second picture of the bedroom is a disaster  because  is very very untidy,  there are a pile of clothes, objects and the joystick play station is on the floor. It has a shelf but it is in disuse apparently. This  bedroom is more untidier than the other bedroom (the first one).

                                         

Natural Place

The first picture is a natural place  where  there is not pollution and the environment is good because you see the mountains, too many buildings and the skyscrapers. In this place there are more vegetation like trees. In middle of this picture there is a little hill.

                                        

The second picture is an unhealthy  place because in this place there is much smog. In the picture there many buildings  and many houses, also we can see many trees and the roads. In this place there is more pollution than the other place definitely.

                                              

My presentation :)

Hi everyone, this is my short presentation, I hope you like it.

I'm Yvannia Neira Olguín , my family and friends call me Yvi. I'm 20 years old. I come from Maipú, i live with my family. We are 6. I have a one pet, it is a dog and her name is Pinta ♥. I've a boyfriend his name is Matías.

In this moment, I'm studying in Alberto Hurtado University and working ina  supermarket too.

I like sharing  with my friends, reading (novels), drawing, watching documentals of History Channel or Discorvery Channel, and movies in my 

free time. I love watch documentals.